Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Four legged friends

I must admit I prefer four legged creatures to the two legged type. They love me fat or thin, ugly or pretty, if I'm in a good mood or bad - they don't care. I have two special neighbors who greet me at the fence every morning. I give them a couple milk bones and a pet and they give me kisses and smiles. It doesn't matter how I'm dressed or if I even combed my hair. They don't judge on anything except pure love. They want nothing more than a kind word and of course, the milk bone. People are too judgemental at times and they don't listen. That's another thing about these neighbors. They hang onto my every word as if it were gospel. It doesn't matter if I'm telling them it's raining or if I'm just telling them how sweet they are. They listen and never interrupt. Unconditional love can only be found in these four legged creatures. We have a lot to learn from them.

Saturday, July 12, 2008

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 10

Today’s Assignment: The Good, the Bad, and the Meter-
Write a three or more stanza poem that uses a metered style for the first two stanzas and a non-metered format for the remaining stanzas. As always, feel free to post your poem in the comments section for others to see.

NOT ONE IN YOUR IMAGE

Not one in your image was
I created to follow you
where you lead, to obey your
every word. That is not me!

Not in your image was
I molded to bow to your
hand raised in anger at me
when you needed to control.

I am stronger than you could ever understand,
and you are weak in your need to
destroy all the goodness life gives you
because you believe you are the god

of all that surrounds you and all
must bow to you or you will banish
them. And now you are alone in your
world. In the end we all left.

There is no one left to bully
no one left to strike down with your
mighty fist. We left because we were
not one in your image.

Friday, July 11, 2008

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 9

Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:42 pm Post subject: Re: 09 - Day nine - A Brief Glossary of Meter

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I will be the first to admit meter is not my strong point. When reading metered poems people often end up doing what I call Dr. Seusing them. At a recent poetry forum a young woman was reading anothers poetry and I had to stop her and said 'you're dr. seusing it!" and the author agreed and asked me to try it. In HS I had a wonderful enlish teacher who taught us to read metered poetry without the emphasis...ta DA ta DA ta DA ta DA...etc,. All that said here's my first attempt.

CRAFT

“Oh!” she cried, “don’t be daft.
Give more freedom to your craft.”
"Surely at the stake I’d burn,
if of my craft the public learned.

My book of spells I hold dear
‘tis my craft the people fear.
Alas, my friend here’s the hitch,
hide your craft if you’re a witch."

Thursday, July 10, 2008

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 8

Today's assignment: Write an elegy about a person or event that is meaningful to you. You don’t necessarily have to approach the most tragic event in your life. Don’t try to take on an event that is still too difficult for you to deal with. Look for something that you can handle.

I've wrote many a post about Rick when he died so it is only appropriate my elegy be about him.

no title for this one yet..... it's a work in progress

From fifteen to fifty-five
we shared each others
hurts and pain and loved
so passionately we couldn’t

ever marry each other
so we would marry
other people and when
you knew you would die soon

You wanted to give us one
last chance for fun and leave
our spouses. Go to Las Vegas
then California where you would die.

I wrote poems about you
you wrote songs about me
then one day you were gone
and my life has never been

the same without your phone calls
your laugh, your jokes about how
we would end up together in a nursing
home where we would drive the other

people crazy while we played
rock music and sang as we
rocked in our chairs still together
now - it will never happen.

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 7

Today's task:
Write a list poem that uses a single line for each item on the list. I'm not a big fan of list poems but gave it a shot.....

My Day in a Nutshell

Hit the alarm and
get out of bed.
go to the bathroom
listen to cats meow

feed the spoiled cats
put on the coffee
get dressed and
comb my hair

feed the stray cat
give a milk bone
to the neighbors dog.
Breathe! Breathe! Breathe!

Back inside make sure
the tub is clean
lay out my husbands clothes
pick up last nights from the floor.

Turn on the news
pack his lunch
make his breakfast
drive him to work.

Come home and
clean the house
do the dishes
mop the floors...

Pick hubby up from work
drive him home
make dinner and once again
do the dishes…

Watch a movie
go online to gotpoetry.com
rate some poems then
Go to bed and set the ^%$## alarm!

Sunday, July 6, 2008

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 6 Persona

This should get me up to date now. Day 5 and 6 are reversed, but didn't want to delete and repost, so am just moving on from here. A Persona is a poem written in another persons voice. You take on their personality and role and write a poem as if they were writing it themselves.
This is an actual event that happened at one of my open mics. This not a joke but a true event. The young man in the poem truly believes this. So full of hatred he can't see shades of gray. This young man had never attended my open mic, but didn't like the idea of black poets attending one hosted by a white woman, so decided to come and bring his hateful attitude to try to cause trouble. It didn't work, but he still carries all that hatred inside him.

Who's a racist?

As my black friends and I
walk into the poetry room
Three white women have
arrived ahead and are seated

they acknowledge us and we’re
invited to sit so we choose
the table next to them
and wait and watch. We dare

them to speak to us and one
smiles and says, “what’s this?”
three men at one table and
three women at the other?”

I sneer my reply, "yeah, racist.”
She looks taken aback and I
glare and dare her to contradict
but obviously I am right.

They didn’t bother to move to
sit with us when we sat down
so they are the racist whites
who hate us black men.

“Well,” she laughs, “I really
thought you were sexist.” She smiles
and I wonder at her stupidity that
she cannot see how racist she is

as she sits with her white women
friends. “You could have joined us,”
she says and again I cannot understand
her blatant racist remarks. We should

have sat down with them when they
are the white racists who deny us
the right to share the same table.
I do not move nor does she or her friends.

As others enter the room – black and white
They sit together as if they don’t
Understand how racist this person is
As she pretends to enjoy all the poetry

read and applauds and asks
questions and discusses race
issues as if she understood and
truly believed we all had a voice.

At the end I sneer at her and walk
out with the knowledge I have
let everyone know with my words
she is a racist and they will see

through her phony smiles and
hugs for everyone as if she
truly cared. I am right!
She is white so she is a racist.

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 5

What Goes Up!

“Come on!” my friend urged
“Let’s go skate around Lake Worth.”
My little voice was yelling no! but
my need to accept the challenge

won out and logic took a back
seat that day. Off we headed,
rented skates and soon were
enjoying the warm sunny day

skating around Lake Worth.
Ah, but soon my friend had
another brilliant plan!
“Let’s skate up the hill!”

so up we went. Once again
I pushed that little voice back
and ignored the thoughts of
this is really dumb!

As we reached the crest
of the hill the little voice
was screaming at me now
and I was screaming back

As we careened back DOWN
the hill! At the bottom awaited
and unexpected and unwanted
sight. Railroad tracks! Duh!

My friend, the athlete, jumped
the tracks and looked back to
encourage me to do the same.
Not as lucky my skates caught

and down I went! As a child I had
my share of scraped knees and elbows
but at thirty-four somehow the pain
was more and the scrapes not

quite as cute and endearing.
I limped back to the skate rental
handed in my skates and ignored
stares and giggles of other skaters.

The next weekend when my friend
called to ask if I wanted to go
water skiing with her.I hung up
the phone and went back to bed!

30 poems in 30 days - day 4

Day fours topic is about place - I chose the woods of VT where I used to snow shoe and focused on one spectacular event that occurred during one of my expeditions.



Dance of the Grouse

The crunch of the crisp snow
Under the snowshoe releases
In me a euphoria I only know
With that first step onto new snow

Virginal until I leave my footprint
Along the path. I feel like the pioneers
Of yesterday who blazed new trails
Across our country for others to follow.

Pure white snow almost blinds me
As the sun hits and reflects back.
The quiet, as pure as the snow,
Wraps me in it’s euphoria of peace.

As I walk the forest comes alive
Birds twitter and I hear the rat tat tat
Of a woodpecker deep off in
Woods filled with wildlife

That waits for me to capture
It on film for others to see
Who cannot follow my steps
Into the forest deep.

I’m startled by a brown grouse
Who jumps in my path I think
To protect a nest but soon I
Realize this is a male as he

Does a mating dance! He fans his feathers
Puffs up his body and bobs his head
Side to side as he watches me curiously
Perhaps to figure out what I am.

As quickly as it began it ends and
The grouse disappears in the
Underbrush and only then do I
Realize I stood camera in hand

And never got one shot of this
Wondrous event that took place
While I stood and watched.
I am sad I missed the chance

To photograph the event but
Still amazed that it happened
And I got to share in this
Spectacular display of nature.

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 3

Day three is to write about some recent news. I chose the California fires.

California Up in Flames

Every year it happens
a careless person drops a
lit cigarette, leaves a
campfire unattended.

Or an evil minded person
wants their fifteen minutes
of fame, so starts a fire
on the coastline of

California and burns
acres of forest land,
homes where people
lose all their memories

saved for years – family heirlooms
lost in fires caused by
another’s lack of concern
for those who live there.

Firefighters battle weary and
frustrated as they know
they can only contain it and
hope for rain to aid them.

Lives will be lost along
with the hopes and dreams
of many, as the fires rage on,
devour all in its path.

So we, in different states, sit
and sigh and shake our heads
while on the news we watch
California up in flames.

30 poems in 30 days - day 2

The topic for day to is something that happened to you.

Fourth of July

Ninety degree heat
humidity rises
bodies wet with moisture
miserable for the
air conditioning has
decided to stop today.
maybe in protest of
too many hot days
where it worked overtime
to keep us cool.
so today we sit
sweat pours from
our faces, rolls
down our backs and
the air condtioner
mocks us - sits silent.
Happy fourth of july!

30 Poems in 30 Days - Day 1

I've been wanting to do this for some time and decided this would be the month I would jump on this. Then the a/c died and other things happened and I thought dang, I won't be able to catch up and get in on this one. But today I decided I was going to give it a try. The poem for day one was something about our childhood. So here's my first contribution. Most of these will be rough drafts and I'll try to tweak them later.

The Day My Sister Forgot Me!

Kindergarten days should be
happy fun filled times
of kids on the playground
laughter, sand boxes and swings.

I was a morning student
and every day at lunch
my older sister, Linda,
walked me home

past scary woods and would
tell me stories of kids
who were lost and killed
and buried there.

Then I got chicken pox
and became very sick
unable to attend the
classes I lay in bed

miserable with fever
and chicken pox itching
even in my throat so
I couldn’t swallow right.

When I got better they put
me in afternoon kindergarten
and Linda was to wait for me
to walk me safely home.

She had become accustomed to
the morning routine and
after school ended headed off
with her friends – forgot about me.

I waited as the playground
emptied out and students
Aad teachers headed away.
I sat and waited. I knew

when she got home
mom would send her
back for me. No way would
I walk past those woods alone.

So I sat and swang and sang
to myself and waited until
I saw her as she headed back
for me. She never forgot again.

Saturday, July 5, 2008

Weekend

Well, been an interesting week for us. The a/c cut out on us thursday and we woke up to a not so comfortable house on the friday... the fourth of July! Called the landlady who called her a/c person yes! they did come out. But it started to pour! The poor guy worked and got it running and it ran a few hours, but stopped working around 8 PM. So I called the landlady and then called the a/c place and left a message. The guy came back today and said the rain got in his way yesterday and he wasn't sure he had the freon level set right. So he worked on it again today and even came back later to check to make sure the levels were maintained. So far so good. It's cold in here! He needed to put in a new compressor which cost them a pretty penny.

Last friday the neighbors on the right shot off some heavy duty fireworks. They were so big I had to go out and ask them to stop and they did. They were scaring the other neighbors the things were so loud and flying so far. Found a bunch of their empties on the lawn and even in the backyard! of the house on the other side of me, the next day. They did realize they were packing too much power for this little neighborhood and quit without an argument. So, I was waiting to see if they would do it again last night, but all we had was the big one at Dillon Park, not too far from us, and nothing else. It poured and I think that put a damper on most peoples plans for fireworks.

We tried to watch Independence Day but a movie we once enjoyed we now find a bit irritating and some of the characters annoying. So, we never finished that and it's been a tradition with us. Not sure if we're changing or if we've just seen it so many times that now we know the movie so are paying more attention to the other nuances of the movie.

So, hope everyone had a safe and enjoyable weekend and hope our a/c stays on for more than 3 hours this time!

Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Rate this poem!

If anyone wants to have some fun how about rating some poems for me. First I'm in the finals in a very high stakes slam and would appreciate any and all ratings. The link is and my poem is The Day Jaybird Flew.

If you want to rate sister versus sisters verses (sorry, couldn't resist the play on words there) click here where my sister, Victoria and I, are head to head in the semi-finals! which means one of us (probably me) will not make it to the finals. My poem is Where Willows Weep and hers is Young Adults.

And last but not least, Victoria, is in the semi-finals in Poem of the Month with Ladybug, Ladybug.

any and all ratings are appreciated. have fun!